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Old 01-28-2007, 01:30 AM   #1
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The promise

Cant you see the fear in my eyes or the pain on my face?
The sorrow and the loneliness caused by mans disgrace
The hunger, thirst and sickness brought on by lack of care
I love you more than life itself
Please don't hit me
I'll be good
I swear

I use to be your baby boy
To snuggle and to hold
To show off to your friends
But now I am too old

I cry when they take me
Please don't make me go
I love you mommy and daddy
I don't want to die
They are taking away my air
Will you please help me
I'll be good
I swear

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Old 01-29-2007, 12:38 PM   #2
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This one takes me to places I'd rather not ... so it did it's job.
A very personal poem that hits a cord in everyone I would say.
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Old 01-29-2007, 01:55 PM   #3
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A very personal poem that hits a cord in everyone I would say.
It sure did.
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Old 01-29-2007, 02:24 PM   #4
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the poem really fulfills its purpose...

i just wanna go home now and snuggle my little baby bird.... too bad i have to wait for another 5hrs
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Old 01-29-2007, 05:15 PM   #5
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Old 01-31-2007, 11:59 AM   #6
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That made me cry. So sad.
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